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Just one smile from you
Sends me soaring through the sky.
Just one glance from you
Gets me higher than high.

Just one word from you
Makes me unable to speak.
Just one kiss from you
Makes me strong and yet weak.

Just one thought of you
Makes my heart skip a beat.
It takes just one of you
To make me feel complete.

Just one minute with you
Makes my whole life worthwhile.
And it takes just one of you
To walk with me down the aisle.
©2004-2009 ~arthman
:iconarthman:

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Another quick little poem, but with heart-felt meaning.

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:iconjesskat:
awww this is a really sweet poem. makes me wish it was about me. lol.
:iconarthman:
LOL! Thanks! The person I wrote this about is someone very special to me, but the situation is complicated now. I was debating whether or not to put this up on here, but I decided to go for it. I wrote it to try and win her back, but it didn't exactly work out like I had wanted...

Anyways, thanks for reading, and for commenting!

Arthman

--
"It's only after we've lost everything that we're free to do anything." - Tyler Durden
:iconmakeshiftwings:
yeah, very sweet. What'd she do? o.o

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Standing here on the shores of destiny, I find myself feeling lonely.
Rabid/Havocc/Nikki
:iconqirjanran:
Awwwwwww I love it~!! :D

And sorry that things didnt' work out with you and her... :tears: She didn't know what a gerat guy she was losing :)
:iconarthman:
Well, I appreciate your saying that. You know what they say, "'tis better to have loved and lost that to have never loved at all." Anyways, you make me feel good when you say that! You only know me through poem, and yet you say some of the kindest stuff about it...and me! I'm glad that I've got you as a friend on here! You provide great support for me, as well as my poetry! Thanks again!

Arthman

--
"It's only after we've lost everything that we're free to do anything." - Tyler Durden
:iconarthman:
Well, I appreciate your saying that. You know what they say, "'tis better to have loved and lost that to have never loved at all." Anyways, you make me feel good when you say that! You only know me through my poems alone, and yet you say some of the kindest stuff about them...and me! I'm glad that I've got you as a friend on here! You provide great support for me, as well as my poetry! Thanks again!

Arthman

--
"It's only after we've lost everything that we're free to do anything." - Tyler Durden
:iconmajorpayne00:
Hey, I really like this poem. Short and sweet. The way to be. It's really good, I like the rhyme scheme. I will see ya later
Stephanie
:icondorothyj:
I am wondering again who this is about and when you wrote this and all that stuffs. I really like it. It makes me sad though, and I think you know why.

Love
Dorothy
:icondorothyj:
this is my favorite poem you have written so far (I reserve the right to change my favorite when/if I see fit). I really liked it a lot. I just had to tell you that again. TTYL!

DorothyJ

~By the way, I am in the middle of posting some new ones on my little page, so you'll have to keep an eye out for that and let me know what you think.

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